Whoa..nice.
I like this alot, lol. Is it all your work?
Um, so ya, good job!!!! :D
i'll definitely help you.
Whoa..nice.
I like this alot, lol. Is it all your work?
Um, so ya, good job!!!! :D
i'll definitely help you.
Pretty cool so far.
I like the gate, that intro kick was loud and unmastered though, lol. Haha, sweet, i hear an anthem.
This is pretty sweet man, just needs SEVERE mastering lol.
Alright, that was my review, lol. Unless this gets better? :O :D
Pretty dark, but pretty cool.
For once I have to disagree. maybe it has something to do with the newgrounds version. But I like to have my kick in front and loud, I always try to not make it too loud so it becomes distorted. but aslong as it don't get that it can't be too loud in my oppinion:)
My music is a bit loud and that is the point. I think many submissions here on newgrounds is too quiet with exeptions ofcourse.
So I'm probably not gonna change this one.
Right... /endrant lol:P
thanks for the review anyways.
-Ene
Its pretty cool, but you can do better Goa-man!
Megaman! Freezeman! Wilyman! Cheeseman! Steveman! Freeman!
GOA MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
**ARGh!!!!!!!!!**
**DIEEEEEEZZZ YOOOOOUuuuu AlllLLLL!!!!111onenoennnoone oo
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Well then, watch as I proceed to do better :D
lol, sytrus, :P
First "true" song? What does that mean? lol. Anyway, i'll give a quick review, due to the fact that i dont have alot of time on my hands.
+ sounds in-tune
+ you used necessary trance FX, such as buildups (the snare roll), etc
+ you have a fairly decent trance/song structure going on here
+ nice synths, even though they're presets
+ nice extra melodies you added on throughout the song
+you seem to have kept your volume at a pretty reasonable level, definitely a plus
- kinda boring
- doesn't really sound like trance, :(
- no main melody really
- kick is WAY to weak, EQ it a bit
= Overall pretty neat, at least its in-tune, thats not how my old/sytrus stuff was, lol. It was just messy clicking really, :P
Anyways, i have a new account with new stuff, i've had it for a while and have been improving and adding onto it as much as possible, if you have the time, i'd love it if you could leave a review or two for me, Thanks.
:D
True song because other songs made on a crappy online dealy... cept for one which was just so people could tell me how to get better. And I really really never know what genre something is... i just guess lol. And the pads (err synth or whatever you called it) i made in a vst. But yea i have trouble with main melody :( Thanks for the review :) i appreciate any and all...
one word.
Whoa.
i'm not saying any more.
...Hard.
:D
but hurts my ears a bit, :(
!!!! check out my stuff, :P
....Hard....? (confused)
At the moment, my audio doesnt work on my computer, so I cant really listen to any music at all. I will as soon as I get this damn thing fixed.
If It hurts your ears, I think you might want to turn it down... just a liiiiiiitttttllllleee bit.
Thanks for the review dude.
-FXUEM-
WWTF
you helped make the original? lol, wow.
Good bass, :D
Yum, bass.
Definitely happy.
by OCON: "Other than that good, except that snare roll in the beginning sucked, no offense."
That snare roll wasn't anything special, yeah, but it didnt suck. Maybe you placed it wrong though? :(
its a fine snare roll, i like it, :D
Pretty cool.
Nice synth, what is that? z3ta+? 3xosc? vanguard? do you even use FL? :P
Nice stuff tho, but one key near the beginning sounded barely off. Thats just me though, :P
NIce remix, just wish it was like a hard trance remix or something.
Was this just a midi rip or something? :(
most of the synths in there are vanguard, with a couple original. All the notes i input myself, except for a really low bassline thats in there for some of the time, because in the original song its barely audible, and i couldnt make out the notes.
Sounds like Duke Nukem music or something, :D
Lol, its awesome, i love that squeeky guitar, :P
Good job man.
You ARE doing pretty good for a 12-year old, just keep at it, and if you're good enough, make music-production part of your future, as well as God, :D
But if music doesnt get good enough for you, then quit, :( or just stop making it so frequently and look for a job, lol.
kk, later.
Check out my music. Anywho, I make hard trance, trance, dnb (now), and happy hardcore, o and i made some ambient, and did i mention i love vegetable ice cream? (WOW CORNY JOKE) lolz. im tired. bye.
Age 34, Male
Don't have one yet.
JM Robinson
Harrisburg, NC
Joined on 1/17/06