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What is this?

Why do you persist on submitting all these ...things that have the possibilty to be decent tracks, and then you name it "whatever" or "idk". Why is that? Do you have no confidence in making music or something?

Seriously man, you're just taking up space on the Newgrounds audio portal if you're going to continue being this way.

1/10, because you deserve it!

wow

i expected this to be some newbie-crap, but...wow... This is great so far man! The bass is sweeeeeeeet, and the structure is good so far too. I hear a melody coming in, **cries**

It seems to go on for quite a while though. Haha, this is sweet.

sashman14@hotmail.com <--my msn if you wanna chat. cuz this is SWEET.

I absolutely LOVE that bass drop and when it continues to change. This stuff is gold. B0UNC3's stuff? Not even close. This track tears his apart man.

Awesome effort, even awesomer song, though slow sometimes, it really makes up for it in its climactic melodic drops. Nice piano too.

Great job. very new to me. NG audio-wise.

10/10 no doubt about it.

cristian-fuentes responds:

Thanks alot it makes me REALLY happy that you took the time to pay my song some attention, I notice there is a lot of commercialized trance sounds on here, and maybe some not so well polished songs on NG, I tought maybe that all NG users were into that heavier hardcore sound. thanks again I really appreciate it :)

Hey there!

Originality- 7. Because well, you said it was "commercial trance" and thats not ultimately creative. its fine tho.
Diversity- 8. Well, sort of ditto to the above. But I like the synths and instruments you used, and man, nice job with the snares and whatnot. Little things DO count too!
Clarity- I didn't really hear anything that i couldn't hear, (?????) but ya, nicely mastered, in other words. The random volume change/filter(?) thing in the beginning was...questionable though.
Effort- Well, listen to it! It's not just simple loops, there's actually variation and all that jazz(but i thought we were talking about techno?) lol, :P

Anywho, overall 10, cuz well, its a good song, and mr cheesy penis can go and cry in a corner, because well, he should. I dont make any sense today, do I?

Alright, i did sense some cheesyness(even a word??) in the track, but hey, it seems like a happy track. I like the almost "summerish" atmosphere you created in this, course thats probably what you intended on doing. I like the beat, if i werent tyipng, i'd be dancing. I like where you placed the breakdowns and snarerolls and the filters are a great add too. The "squeaky" synth is probably one of the main sources of the cheesiness factor in the song. But its a good song, good effort, although ya, seeing from what l_XI(spelled right?) said, i think i wanna hear more hardcore stuff. Can you make some crazy insane happy hardcore maybe? well, long enough review. Good song, tad cheesy, but thats just part of the summer-ish mood of the song, so .....ya.

10/10

dj-padman1 responds:

Well, thanks very much for the review. You've raised some very interesting and intelligent issues there.
The filtering at the start that you sensed was out of place was put there to disguise a horrible high-pitched synth that I accidentally pushed the fader up too high on. Don't ask me why I didn't just turn the volume of that synth down afterwards, its complicated :)
You hit the nail on the head with the squeaky synth observation. It's pretty damn evil...
And yes, I'm definately gearing up for some hard anthems. Exams at the moment though, killing me daily.
Once again, thanks for the insightful review.

Good, wonderful trance.

Nice song so far, the structure is good so far, its at the mini-melody right now. Nice, but that string is really killing my ears, no joke. Good so far though, did you use vanguard? Anyways, snare roll, nice break. Another SR, nice. I like your use of the kicks and crashes as little "tension" effects.

Nice melody that comes in afterwards. Haha, pretty melody.

Pro-sounding, very much so. Very very nice. A+
Wow, that bass is awesome too, i love the structure of this song man, good trance i say.

Dude, I really wanna work with you, if you could spare the time, maybe we can talk on msn?

I love your style, just that it needs to be more loved on NG rather than the "CRAZY RAVE INSANENESS!!111". This stuff is more serious.

But anyway, maybe we can chat on msn and collab or something? What do you use? FL 5? 6? ....reason.. :(

anywho, sorry for long review, 9/10 for song, cuz it aint perfect, not a single song is. My msn is sashman14@hotmail.com

Check out my stuff too if you can. KthxBye!

Anima-Theory responds:

I used Fl Studio 5 XXl.....I think :P

I wouldn't mind collabing with you, I haven't done a collab for a while.

I added you to MSN so yeah.

I didn't think the strings sounded that bad, but meh, everyone has their opinion.

Thanks for the review

Anima_Theory

**AHE,M!!!!!**

You dirty little cheating NOOB!

This is a song written by the artist DJ Slow

He's on www.soundclick.com

i'll friggin LINK him for you too.

www.soundclick.com/djslow

Son of a dirty cheating piece of crap man. Such a beautiful song...yet you stole the friggin thing.

The REAL song is called "Don't Stop (2006 club mix).

noob. :(

DJ-Anti-Pop responds:

I didn't know. This was "done" by a friend man. Please, I put MY work up there. His NG name is Bluedude.

Later, I will put MY stuff up there.

What can i say?

this song blew my mind. everything was great. if i could say ANYTHING WRONG AT ALL about this song, i'd TRY MY ABSOLUTE best to say it was the repetitiveness of that pWNed up melody.

hats off to ya man. newgrounds audio should be more like this.

im proud of you, lol. my audio hero.

what program did you use for this and can i get your msn? XD

The-XI responds:

Haha, I don't know you, and I love you already :P

I'm not one to use MSN (i used it once in the entire time I've had it...) but, if you want it, its something like:

zionnn1@hotmail.com

Thanks for the awesome review :D

er.........yea.

I dont get this song man, there's no real melody, no real organization. If you need some sort of help, listen to alot of songs. cuz, this sounds terrible, lol. sorry, dont feel bad, i sucked too. check out "sashman"

and seriously, dont be a cocky girl, "josh pwns all noobs", well, no not really. you're just like the rest of them.

er yea. song....sure.

Hazard-Rush-Studios responds:

hey! its techno what u spect? well anyway i really do pwna de noobas so u and ur orginized songs can go suck on gary brolsma's nipples.

Great.

Although i prefer that remix much more, :P

Great track man, i thought maybe i could sense some "gold saw" in there somewhere, or is it just me? :P

guitar? i dunno, i guess its fine.

great song so far while i listen to it.

er.... 4/5 though, actually, no. that uppy bass, just kicked up the score, lol.

5/5.

happy birthday!

So uh yeah, sorry.

Sorry you can't get an 11, :P

Great track, I LOVED that really really hard saw, its very nice. very, indeed.

I like the bass, very bouncy(no not like B0unc3) and clear and, heavenly, lol.

9 on Diversity because of that synth, you know, that awesome saw, because it reminded me so much of Ian Van Dahl, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, :P

but that can't be helped, its a beautiful, awesome sound.

you had to use it.

10/10.

5/5.

great song, keep it up! review my stuff!

All of you already know that...

This producer is a fag and should die.

Translation:

You are amazing and continue to improve everyday.

lol, peace out man.

awesome stuff.

Check out my music. Anywho, I make hard trance, trance, dnb (now), and happy hardcore, o and i made some ambient, and did i mention i love vegetable ice cream? (WOW CORNY JOKE) lolz. im tired. bye.

Age 34, Male

Don't have one yet.

JM Robinson

Harrisburg, NC

Joined on 1/17/06

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