maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
You could've made it sound sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet when the melody was going at 1:41. Instead of the bassline constantly bumbling around at random notes you could've made that "going down, then back up" bassline, which would've definitely complimented the saw melody and put some power into the track.
It is kind of repetitive though, I dont think this deserves Front Page, sorry :(